Saturday, 30 January 2010

Diary Entry

We wrote this diary entry to show the audience that "A Widow's Death" is set in 1943 and to tell the story. If we were to continue this film, we would have it based around different diary entries to tell the story.

"Visited mama today. She did not look at all well. I stayed with her a while. And we talked a while. About nice things. The time we spent together and the fun that we had. And then i left her. Just as she left me. So unexpectedly. So...sudden."

We have used short sentences to show that the widow is thinking bout her thoughts. The longest sentence is "the time we spent together and the fun that we had". This is also the happiest line in the diary entry. She reads this like its the thing that made her day and shes over joyed that it happened.

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